http://lametortoise.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] lametortoise.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] xrosepetalsx 2010-06-07 12:35 am (UTC)

AWH... that was fantastic... u make me wanna say the f word before fantastic... but i nvr use it... so i shall not... lol... but obviously, u must know how much i love it... haha... sigh... jealous kyu...i really like the ending... it was really sweet...

i spotted one common mistake in my first reading... u have to be careful when spelling barely yeah? u ended up using barley... lol... yes, i promise to re-read this a few times... and depending on my mood, comment again... haha...

THANKS FOR WRITING!!! it was AWESOME!!!

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